Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response
1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW: Joty, you started off well but what happened towards the end? Strong analysis of unseen product (Q21) and good knowledge of Galaxy CSP (Q4) EBI: There are gaps in your knowledge e.g. Tatler (Q3) and perhaps Film. Revise/work on timings. 2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer. -Non verbal codes: athletic body connotes that subject is well conditioned and prepared for "battle" - Body stance / position connotes that the subject is ready to face and overcome any opponent. -Verbal codes: The text is positioned over the top of the tyre to signify the challenge and create synergy between the image and the message in the text. 3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main...